About the afternoon I found out I was pregnant (which was back in august '11, I feel the need to add this bc ppl keep congratulating me in their comments).
I suppose in reading back over this, it is also about the transitions I went through while pregnant and the final one I went through when I gave birth. The whole thing was very emotionally stressful for me.
I think this is something I've needed to write for a long time.
Prompt: 'Senescense' - suggested by ^neurotypeEDIT 2/23/2013: Okay, honestly, I've altered the punctuation in this piece like 6 times now, but this time, I think I've got it right. However, I also added a space in the last stanza and added the word 'hallowed' to the last line. So I really need your opinions. I never liked how hurried the last stanza felt, and especially not the last line. I think this works better, but I can't be sure at this point. Also, I'm worried about my word choice. Is it redundant to say 'hallowed redemption'? Do you have any word suggestions to replaced 'hallowed'? I definitely feel that line needs to be a bit longer, I'm just not sure what it's missing. I appreciate any insight you may have! Thanks.