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I like to pretend
That you still listen
To each word I choose
With careful precision,

Harboring them in your heart,
For a less complicated tomorrow.
:iconriseandbe:
For my muse.
I miss him tonight.

Also, for :icon100themeschallenge: #80: words.
Yea, I already gave up doing them in order. =P
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~spligity Feb 25, 2011  Student General Artist
the first bit is really great!
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*RiseandBe Feb 25, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconluulee:
oh I can totally relate to this right now ):
simply beautiful :heart:
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*RiseandBe Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Aw, yeaa... it's rough.
But thank you!
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~AmyATOMIC-x Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the half rhyme in the first stanza.
"listen
precision"
Beautiful writing.

AA<3.
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*RiseandBe Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, dear! :heart:
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~AmyATOMIC-x Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!

AA<3.
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:iconjoejr63111:
yeah.... i find my self being guilty of forgetting to cherish her words....
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*RiseandBe Feb 21, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
One of my favorite things about him was that he never forgot to cherish mine. He loved my words. Sometimes, I think maybe more than he loved me. If that is even possible.
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:iconjoejr63111:
words are powerful things i fear. they are to be remembered.
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